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Last to fall!

July 03, 2020 · Imaginary Thoughts Photographer in me! Photography

You were still in womb when your siblings were sprouting!

You were laid behind when it rained!

You were sprouting when your buddies were blooming!


Your spring was stretchy!

Your summer was a bummer!

Your autumn was accelerating!

Your winter is spectacular!

Yet...

You will be the last to fall!

11 comments

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  1. Suzette Benjamin · 2020-07-04

    Awesome! Great poem very well penned.🙏💖

    1. Ahtees · 2020-07-07

      Awww! Thank you Suzette 😊

  2. Shantanu Baruah · 2020-07-06

    Absolutely witty and gorgeous - what a beauty

    1. Ahtees · 2020-07-07

      Awww! Thank you Shantanu 😊

      1. Shantanu Baruah · 2020-07-07

        My absolute pleasure

  3. Singh Lovely · 2020-07-12

    Well written 👍🤗

    1. Ahtees · 2020-07-12

      Aww! Thanks Singh Lovely, glad you liked it :)

      1. Singh Lovely · 2020-07-12

        You are welcome 😊🤗

  4. Saniya · 2020-07-24

    Beautiful poem.

    1. Ahtees · 2020-07-24

      Aw! Thank you Saniya 😊

      1. Saniya · 2020-07-24

        It's my pleasure 😊